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Subject: Raynie Wish (Rose)
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masterly 1.10.09 - 01:39am
Dark liquid crept.
Seeped into our souls.
Each poison droplet
made loose our hold;
till malign flooded the
Heart-vales. The bed we slept:
It laughed our bold passion
away with a thundering
aqueous breath... *
atreides 2.10.09 - 01:31am
Iv been waiting in ant tion! A welcome piece. I enjoyed the pervading intimacy and deft poingant touch! Im looking forward to seeing u push those old school sensibilities though. *
lucretia 2.10.09 - 03:42am
..i adore it!! :o) *
zenarchy 2.10.09 - 01:34pm
A unique classical poetry voice, and one to watch thinks I, i'm suspecting you will do great things around here! I am slightly worried that you may have withheld something here though- like you played this one safe yet have much more in store. *
darkseth 2.10.09 - 09:00pm
I think the number of views this poem has recieved goes to show how many people have anti ted ur work... And u ddnt disappoint. A welcome contrast among friends, im sure ur style wil giv us all new ways of thinking and a deeper appreciation for the art itself. Ur voice is heard among this herd haha *
fear 4.02.12 - 11:36pm
very beautifully written...the words seem to know your dreams and shape themselves into what you want... *
vampboy 4.02.12 - 11:49pm
Truly an inspiration!! (: great work! *
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