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Subject: The dark
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twenty7d 21.02.12 - 10:32pm
I don't know what it is
there's something about the dark
that makes one think of things unknown
pictures that make no sense
the silence in the dark screams louder than a lion at day.
This darkness haunts.
I can almost touch it with my bare hands.
I lay awake and close my eyes
and hide in the dark
yet I cant hide from it.
My heart cries for a better place
a place unknown
a place were I'll be unknown
a place were emotions are unknown. *
fear 22.02.12 - 09:02pm
second verse, first 5lines... *
lucretia 28.02.12 - 05:42pm
what fear said. *
fear 28.02.12 - 08:09pm
lol. i hate being the critic, but did you realise what i meant by saying that lucretia? those are the only lines i thought were worth posting...
sorry 27D...by all mean go criticize some of my poems-make it brutal.lol. *
lucretia 29.02.12 - 04:49pm
i said it in three words 
lol. ssshh.. i try to be nice! :D ..hey! we can whisper and giggle.. then when poem writer asks what we're talking about say ..nothing x) hehe *
lucretia 29.02.12 - 04:50pm
dude!!! holy , is 27D a bra size 
*
fear 29.02.12 - 05:49pm
no lucretia hun...27D is a non-existant bra-size...there's 26C, 28C but never 27C but D only starts at 32D and goes up...27D would be a girl whos rib-diameter is physically incapable of supporting a D-cupsize *
twenty7d 29.02.12 - 06:14pm
Okay heres the thing... 5lines worth posting. Poetry is not about perfection to me its about simply writin what i wanna write. So you being critical is like ... Okay her opinion. Jss 1 of those things i dont entertain. I mean i ddnt reply nd u had to remind me. Like really??? I have to deal with this. Look I'll make xit simple i wont post here :-) *
fear 29.02.12 - 07:07pm
well i did tell you not to read it...A LOT of times...and i did say sorry...if you have a flare for the dramatic life...well i guess i cant stop you...but if you really dont care (like you say you dont) then none of this would matter...btw the bra thing was all fact - not aimed at anyone hun... *
twenty7d 29.02.12 - 07:21pm
No hard feelings lady... Yeah 27d s nt my bra size... Lol *
lucretia 1.03.12 - 03:02pm
i was being facetious ;) *
fear 1.03.12 - 06:13pm
riiiiiiight...we all know your just saying that now that 27D said its not her bra size, lucretia...dont lie.lol.
*
lucretia 1.03.12 - 09:04pm
somehow i doubt that twenty7d is anime x) lol.. *
fear 2.03.12 - 05:29pm
Anime? you know thats a japanese style of drawing cartoons, right lucret? *
lucretia 5.03.12 - 04:58pm
yes, anime.. and yes, i do ;) *
fear 5.03.12 - 05:15pm
CONGRATS HUN!!!
its official now 27d... you have the blog with the most comments!!!
What do you have to say for yourself? *
twenty7d 14.03.12 - 12:53pm
I feel like a ninja *
fear 14.03.12 - 09:32pm
she feels like a ninja everybody!
quick! someone get her a ninja...to do whatever with... *
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