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Subject: Difficulty Breathing
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fear 20.02.12 - 07:11pm
Breath has been lost,
chase it back, keep it out...
only liquid fills me slowly,
breaking my shaking body...
screams sound silent ,
just as worthless, as my lungs, to shout...
bubbles-life giving air-floats away from my reach...
my frail life still,
my arms too heavy...
Give me air!
let it in!
gasp to breathe...
Die without...
*
vampboy 20.02.12 - 08:17pm
I'm very captivated by this poem.. almost as if I could feel what you wrote for real... *
lucretia 21.02.12 - 05:30am
i had to take a deep breath after reading this.. and silently sighed. *
fear 21.02.12 - 08:12pm
did you-guys realize it's about drowning? people seem to think it's about err.......something else... *
lucretia 28.02.12 - 05:25pm
i thought it was obvious. lol, people are dumbasses o.O one-track mind leaves 'em blind. *
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