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Subject: To Starve
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fear 19.02.12 - 07:23pm
Feeling cold aint the worst
doubling the pain is the thirst
the hunger is just as strong
fading as you move along
how long does it take to die
how much longer shall i breathless lie
in the sand from the storm
when will my body take deaths form
excruciating like this craving
i dont want help,i dont need saving
just pull me further and further away
keep all those who wish me harm at bay
don't fuel the hate, don't quench my thirst
don't love- God no! -your not the first
leave here and save your own soul instead
dont pity sinners who would be better off dead.. *
vampboy 20.02.12 - 08:07pm
... Very nice, and deep. *
lucretia 21.02.12 - 05:37am
great stuff! ..om nom nom.. i eat it up! :D *
fear 21.02.12 - 08:14pm
lucretia! *
sockets 26.04.12 - 01:21pm
Passionate n deeply crafted. . .luvd it. *
fear 29.04.12 - 08:58pm
Thanks Sox! If you want to see more of my poems you can take a look at my group...I only put the nicer ones in cornstrees society(felt like I was flooding for a while.lol.)
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